Microcopy Inventory

How to read this

• Screen: the wireframe file (state included, for example home-empty).
• Zone: the region of the screen the line sits in.
• Line: the exact text on screen today, verbatim.
• Type: heading, button, link, field-label, hint, body, state-message, status, nav, footer. A line a user types (not product copy) is tagged (USER) and is never rewritten.

Not listed, on purpose: the reviewer wireframe tree (nav.js), and deferred asset placeholders ([logo], [chart], [preview image]), which stand for a missing asset, not missing copy.

Rewrite log (was / became)

Two page names in this log no longer exist and are not rewritten: home-savefocus, retired 2026-08-21 with the Save tab, and the strings that moved with it. A rewrite log records what was decided on the day it was decided; renaming its subject afterwards would make the record say something that did not happen. The live inventory below is the one that is kept current.

The running record of every product line changed in Steps 5 to 7, screen by screen. Step 5 does the sample (the Home set); Steps 6 and 7 add the rest. Lines not listed for a rewritten screen were checked against voice.md and already conform.

Home set (Step 5 sample, done)

All five Home pages (home, home-empty, home-error, home-loading, home-savefocus) were checked line by line against voice.md. Home was the hand-built reference for the whole wireframe set, so it already embodies the voice: only two lines needed normalizing. Structure and markup were not touched, only text.

Verified already-conformant on the Home set (no change needed), the anchors the rollout must preserve:

• Trust line "Read-only. Tendd cannot move your money." (Dictionary D7), on every populated Home page.
• "You're paying for 14 subscriptions" and "a month, for what you have signed up for" (Principle 3 framing).
• Loader "Getting your subscriptions. This usually takes a moment." (Dictionary D10 pattern).
• Error "We could not refresh just now. Showing your last update from today, 9:14 AM." plus "Try again" (Dictionary D4; error keeps the last known list).
• "Connect your bank" and "Add a subscription" on home-empty (Dictionary D2, D1).
• Alert banner "Netflix went up by $2.50, now $17.99 a month." (Principle 2, active voice, names the actor).

Step 6: rollout to the remaining 15 screens (done)

Every non-Home screen was rewritten by one subagent per screen, all writing to voice.md, then reconciled here. 37 lines changed across 11 screens; 4 screens (Alerts, Cancel Guide, Upgrade, Settings) were already fully in voice. Structure, markup, reviewer annotations, aria-labels, user content, and data fixtures were not touched (only visible product copy).

Fully conformant, no change (verified line by line): Alerts (and states), Cancel Guide (and states), Upgrade, Settings. Their in-voice anchors: the alert lines name the actor in active voice ("A payment to Amazon Prime did not go through"), Cancel Guide keeps the reversible-action framing ("you can always resubscribe later") and the non-judgmental "it is not your fault", Upgrade keeps the single dismissible Pro gate with "Maybe later", Settings keeps its plain notification copy.

Cross-screen consistency (checked after the rollout)

The canonical labels now read identically everywhere they appear: "Back to your subscriptions" (7 pages), "See your subscriptions" (4), "Connect your bank" (5), "Add them yourself" (6), "through Plaid" (6), and the read-only line "cannot ... your money" on every trust surface.

The manual-add family carries three distinct labels on purpose, one per action: "Add them yourself" (the method, paired against Connect your bank), "Add a subscription" (the affordance to add one, on Home, empty states, and Connections), and "Add it by hand" (the in-page toggle on Add Subscription that reveals the custom-entry fields when a preset is not found). These are three different actions, so they keep three labels; none uses the banned word "manually".

Finalization fixes (accessibility and reviewer notes)

Three references outside the visible copy still named retired labels; they were synced so nothing points at a string that no longer exists:

• share-snapshot-loading: aria-label "Creating your card" to "Making your card" (matches the visible heading).
• alerts-error: the reviewer zaction note "Back to Home" to "Back to your subscriptions".
• add-subscription: the reviewer zaction note "See my list" to "See your subscriptions".

Step 7: verify and fix (done)

Four adversarial reviewers re-checked all 41 pages against voice.md. They found four real voice misses (fixed below), two consistency judgments (resolved with no change), and coverage gaps (now recorded). Screens and this log were fixed together.

Consistency judgments (resolved, no change):

• subscription-detail base/empty/loading appbar "back to Home" chevron: kept. It is the back-nav chevron to the parent (the Home tab keeps its nav label per D3), uniform across all four detail states; the error state's "Back to your subscriptions" is the separate content-recovery button. Two patterns by design, not a drift. Closed on 2026-08-11: this exemption rested on the chevron saying "Home", and a later round changed all six detail chevrons to "Your subscriptions", so the error page carried one destination under two wordings a screen apart. The button is now "Your subscriptions" too.
• subscription-detail-unrecognized "We could not identify this": kept. Active voice with the actor, and the next sentence names the object ("match it to a service").

Coverage additions (lines on screen but missing from the Step 1 inventory, now recorded so nothing ships outside this file):

• cancel-guide-no-guide detail-head: "Cancel The New York Times" (heading) and "$17.00 / month, you can always resubscribe later" (body).
• cancel-guide-blocked detail-head: "Cancel Netflix" (heading) and "$17.99 / month, still active for now" (body). The "still active for now" amount variant is authored copy specific to the error state.
• connections "Added by you" source card: the "Added" field value "Kept up to date by you".

Reviewer-note syncs (outside visible copy, aligned to current labels):

• add-subscription-empty zaction: "add it manually" to "add it by hand".
• connect-bank zaction: "choose your bank" to "Connect your bank".

Wireframes rebuild, Home as the etalon (2026-08-05)

The wireframe stage was re-run against the upgraded IA, and Home was rebuilt as the etalon. No line was rewritten. What changed is which lines the screen carries and where they sit, and this file follows, because a line inventory that lists lines no screen shows is wrong in the same way a missing line is.

Not a copy change, but recorded here because the screen reads differently: the next charge is rendered days first and the date second (conventions section 5, and node 2.6 block 5), against a fixed fixture date of 1 August. "in 2 days, Aug 3", and "tomorrow" at one day.

The four states of Home (2026-08-05, same rebuild)

Again no line was rewritten. Two stale inventory rows were corrected against the Step 5 log, which had already resolved both and whose decisions the screens have been rendering since July: home-savefocus summary-strip is "you might not be using", and the door label is "Add a subscription".

Two findings for Voice, left open rather than fixed here, because the words are not this stage's to change:

1. home-empty carries two headings that say the same thing a hundred pixels apart: "Nothing to add up yet" in the summary strip and "Nothing here yet" over the two doors. Both are in the inventory, both are now visible on one screen with no zone boxes between them, and together they read as a stutter.
2. The two home-savefocus candidate rows put the date first ("Trial ends: Aug 18", "Next: Aug 11") while every other row in the product now leads with the days (conventions section 5). These two lines pair the next charge with how long it has been unopened, so the fix is a rewrite and not a reformat.

The rest of the main flow (2026-08-05, same rebuild)

Nodes 1.1, 1.2, 1.3 with its four returns, 1.5 with its empty state, and 2.7 with its five states. Unlike the Home rebuild this one does add lines: three blocks of the landing and most of the detail screen had no copy at all, because the July screens did not have the blocks. Every new line is in the inventory below. What follows is what changed about lines that already existed.

Two fixtures corrected, which is data and not copy. The base detail page now renders Spotify Premium, because the screen exists for the decoder line and its default should be the case that shows one; Netflix moved to the price-change state, which is where the canonical alert case belongs. And the failed payment is Amazon Prime, not Peloton: alerts.html and this inventory both said Amazon Prime, and only wireframes/docs/conventions.md said Peloton. It has been corrected there. The failure was dated Jul 2 on the July screen, which its own billing cycle contradicts; the rebuilt Alerts dates it Jul 20, and that is now the only date in the set.

One finding for the map, not for Voice. Node 2.7 block 8 asks for "edit the details" and the map has no node to send it to: node 1.4 owns the only form in the product, and the grey screen borrows it. Recorded in ia/docs/nodes/2-7-subscription-detail.md.

The rest of the set (2026-08-05, same rebuild)

The nineteen MVP pages that were still on the July frame: node 1.4 with its three states, node 3.8 with its three, node 4.9 with its two, node 4.10, node 6.14 with its three, node 6.15 with its dialog, and node 6.16. Two of those state pages had never existed. The three LATER screens (4.11, 5.12, 5.13) are untouched and keep their rows above: round 2 brings them to the same contract.

Every carried fix from the IA work is closed. The share block is off cancel-win, the Name field is off settings and the currency row is on it, cancel-guide has the three blocks the block bank found missing, and connections states the last check and the disconnect consequence on every source with one number for Chase instead of two.

Nothing was rewritten for style. Every change above is a block the node asks for and the screen did not have, a fixture that disagreed with itself, or a label the dictionary had already settled and the inventory had not caught up with.

The critique (2026-08-05, Step 9)

One line left the product, and it is the only copy change the critique produced.

Everything else the critique found was structure or a document that had fallen behind the screens, and none of it touched a line. The log is wireframes/docs/critique.md.

Round 2: the three LATER screens (2026-08-05)

The last seven pages left the July frame and three states were drawn for the first time, so the inventories for node 4.11, node 5.12 and node 5.13 are rewritten above. Their compositions come from the second bank round (ia/docs/blocks.md, types H, I and J), which ran before the screens were drawn.

Round 3: the auth model (2026-08-10)

Five pages and one field, from the decision that closed the last structural [?] in the map. This is the round that re-opened a stage marked Done, and the copy carries the reason rather than hiding it: on the bank path the email is asked with the trust argument attached, not as a signup.

Round 4: the copy latch after UI + Visual (2026-08-11)

Stage 07 compared every coloured page against this file and found thirteen divergences. None was a colouring error: the visible text of all 28 coloured pages is character-identical to its grey original, so every one of them was a gap between the frozen grey and this inventory, opened before colour existed. Voice reopens for exactly that, and closes them here.

What this round did not do. It did not touch the eleven ARIA and form-semantics findings from the same pass. Those are markup, not copy, and they belong to the stage that owns structure.

D-Gate: the locked list, and one promise that had to go (2026-09-02)

The first lines written in this repository rather than copied into it, and the first written after the design repository was frozen. Ground: docs/decisions.md, D-Gate. A free person now walks through the bank door once, the scan runs, and the reveal returns the count, the total and three names across three categories. The rest are on the list, counted in the total, and not named until Tendd Pro.

Everything below is checked against voice.md twice, because this is exactly the kind of copy its Forbidden table was written to stop. Two rules bind hardest here:

• No exposure framing. The locked lines say what IS on the list, never what it is costing somebody, and never a number framed as a shock with the answer sold behind it. "They are on your list and counted in your total" is the fact; "you have 11 unknown charges" would be the alarm, and it is the line this whole set was written to avoid.
• No hype and no urgency. A gate is a statement of what a plan includes, in the register the rest of the product already uses on history-trends-locked ("Your list, your total and your alerts stay free and uncapped"). Nothing here says "unlock", "now", or "don't miss".

Two more, and they were nearly typed straight onto the screen. Node 5.13.3 lists what a Pro person has, each row a name and a short second half. D-Gate adds two things to Pro and the list had four rows, so building the screen produced two halves that no inventory owned. They are written here first, which is the whole point of the rule surviving the move: the friction that used to be another repository is now four keystrokes, and only these are legal.

One more line, written 2026-09-02 when the upgrade screen was built. Node 5.13 draws two priced buttons, and Tendd cannot take a payment yet, so they are not drawn. The design already solved this exact problem once, on the lifetime card: it carries no button and says "Not on sale yet. We are still working out the price", on the stated ground that "a button that cannot state an amount is worse than no button". The two priced cards CAN state an amount and still cannot be pressed, which is a different absence and needs its own sentence rather than a borrowed one.

What was written and then dropped. "You have 11 more subscriptions than we can show you" and "See what you are really paying for": the first is a count framed as a deficit and the second is "what you wasted" wearing a different coat. Both are the Forbidden table's exposure framing, on the one screen whose own line is "This is what you have signed up for, not what you wasted."

The two public documents, and the links that had been pointing at a locked door (2026-09-20)

Two screens joined the inventory whole rather than by rewrite, terms and privacy, and they are the first strings in this file written for a reader who is not signed in and may never be. The voice does not change for them. A privacy policy is exactly the place the Forbidden table was written for: "we take your privacy seriously" is the line Principle 4 exists to refuse, and every claim on these two pages is one a person could check.

Nothing on them was composed from what a policy usually says. The list of who else can see your data is the list of hostnames the running product talks to, read out of the code: Supabase, Plaid, Google when you press the Google button, Vercel, and Google Fonts, which is on the list because the typeface is fetched from Google on every page load and a reader deserves to be told so. "There is no advertising, no analytics and no tracking of any kind in Tendd" is a falsifiable sentence and it was verified before it was typed: there is no analytics SDK, no logging service and no console call anywhere in app/, lib/ or components/.

The three promises are not new strings. They are the three data-privacy already owns, printed again, because a promise that is worded differently in two places is two promises.

What changed is where six existing links point. The rule they now follow is one line: a public screen links to a public document, an in-app screen links to the in-app screen. P12.

The five in-app links that say "Data and privacy" did not move. They belong to the screen with the switches and the download button, which is a control panel and not a document, and a person already signed in wants the controls.

The address on the two documents, and the entity that is still missing (2026-09-23)

The founder bought tendd.co on 2026-09-23, the product moved onto it, and privacy@tendd.co now forwards to a person. So the one section both documents were written without could be written: who runs Tendd, and where to write about your own data.

The sign-in email, which nobody had written (2026-09-24)

G46. The letter was Supabase's default, "Magic Link" and "Follow this link to login", sent from Supabase's own address. It is now two letters in the product's voice, sent from signin@tendd.co, and the rows are under sign-in-mail below.

The policy follows the mail (2026-09-24)

G46 moved the sign-in email off Supabase's shared sender and onto Resend, and the founder routed every address on tendd.co to one Gmail inbox kept for his projects. Both made a line of /privacy untrue on the day they happened, and "That is the whole list" with it. npm run check:mail now fails when the policy and the sender disagree.

Sign in becomes a panel, and most of its words leave (2026-09-27)

P17. The founder asked for a sign-in with the action in front and the explanation elsewhere: Google first and largest, email as a second button that leads to the field, in a dialog over the public page rather than on a page of its own, and the descriptions moved to the two public documents. They were already there, or in the letter: /privacy says what Tendd holds and why the address is kept, and the letter says the link works once. So nothing had to be written into either document, and every line below was cut or shortened rather than added, except three: the line under the heading, "Continue with email", and the line that points at the two documents.

The same day the founder asked for "Get started" to be treated the same way, and node 1.2 became two pictured doors in the same card, opened over the landing. Its words stayed; three went.

The policy follows Turnstile (2026-09-27)

P18. The sign-in letter is now asked for behind Cloudflare Turnstile, which sees the browser and its address for the moment it checks. Cloudflare was already on the list for mail to privacy@tendd.co, so its row grew rather than a new one appearing, and "That is the whole list" stays true.

The same day the founder asked for a minute between two letters. N5 had already set it and the provider already held to it, in silence.

The free scan runs once, and the second door says so (2026-09-28)

P20. D-Gate always said a free person's Item is removed once the scan is done, and the product never removed it. Now it does, and that makes two lines necessary: the trust line for a bank that read and stopped, which was owned on 2026-09-02 and never printed (G3), and one for the person who presses "Connect your bank" a second time. Every door keeps its words; the route behind them sends a used scan to node 5.13.

The screen before Plaid stops promising the wrong next screen (2026-09-28)

G25. Plaid shows its own returning-user screen before any bank: a phone number, a code by text, and "Continue as guest" under them. It is on for every customer and /link/token/create has no parameter to refuse it. The line before the button promised a bank picker, so the first thing an avoider met after trusting us was a request for a phone number nobody had mentioned.

One more, from the same cause. Every free scan now ends disconnected, and node 6.14 drew no card for a disconnected source, so a person whose list came from one scan read "No sources yet" over it (G52).

The same round closed G39 on paper, where it had already closed on screen: since P17 the first step of sign-in says "New to Tendd? Either way starts your account.", and "Type the email you used" is gone. The duplicate of clusters A and B that P17 left behind (one copy with the new sign-in rows, one with the old rows and the letter) is one copy again: the new sign-in rows and the letter, each once.

Tendd Pro can be paid for, in test mode (2026-09-28)

P24. Stripe landed, so node 5.13's buttons and 5.13.3's facts have values. Every line below was owned already except three, and those three are the smallest forms of lines that were.

Settings says when a cancelled Pro ends (2026-09-29)

The founder cancelled Tendd Pro on dev.tendd.co, went to Settings, and read a bare "Pro" with no date: nothing on the screen said the plan was ending. /upgrade said it ("Ends / 1 May 2027. It does not renew"), Settings did not.

Your trends opens for Tendd Pro (2026-09-29)

P25, closing G18. The founder paid on dev.tendd.co, opened Trends and met the lock he had just paid to open, because the Pro view had never been built. It is built from node 5.12's owned lines; what is new is only what real data needs and a fixture never showed: a total that fell, a price that went down, a subscription that was cancelled inside the window, and a list where nothing moved.

A cancelled Tendd Pro can be kept (2026-09-29)

P27. The founder cancelled, then asked whether he could change his mind. He could, but only inside Stripe's portal ("Don't cancel subscription"), behind a button called "Manage plan", and no line on either screen said so.

The letters about your subscriptions (2026-09-29)

P29. Settings had four switches and nothing behind them: no letter was ever sent. Now two letters exist, and every word in them is below. They are cut from lib/letters.ts, which lib/letters.test.ts holds to these sentences. The item sentences are the alerts screen's own where one exists ("went up by", "did not go through", "charges ... in 2 days", "See what changed", "What to do", "See Netflix"), so a person reads the same fact in the same words in the inbox and on the screen.

renewal-mail

P35. The notice the terms promise before a yearly plan renews. Behind no switch.

alert-mail (+ digest-mail)

The when-words are the alerts screen's: "today", "tomorrow", "in 2 days". Where the charges are in more than one currency the sum is left out of both the subject and the line ("Your week ahead: 3 charges", "3 subscriptions charge this week."), because a sum across currencies is true of nothing. The digest footer is the alert letter's.

What Tendd Pro says it adds, made true (2026-09-29)

P30, G56. The founder asked that every line on the Pro list be true before a live key, without asking anybody for access to their accounts. Two promises were not: screenshots for each cancel step and a link that "skips the retention screens" (Tendd has neither, and no link can skip a service's own "please stay" screen), and "unusual" and "duplicate" charges among the advanced alerts (nothing detects either).

What a free scan does not name, said once (2026-09-29)

P31, G53. The founder: show a couple of names and one block with a lock, "you have XX more subscriptions, go Pro and see everything, or add them yourself", with a button to the plans. The same day a free scan stopped keeping the names it does not show, so nothing on these rows is hidden by the screen any more: there is nothing behind them to hide.

A free scan is held for seven days, and paying names the rest (2026-09-29)

P32. The founder, on P31's consequence that paying no longer named anything until the bank was read again: "хотелось бы автоматически после оплаты делать скан". A free scan's connection is now kept for seven days without being read, paying reads it, and every line that described the old ending says the new one, with its date.

The locked block in the landing's language (2026-09-29)

P34. The founder turned down P33's redesign and asked for the public page's techniques. One string is new; the heading keeps its words and is set in three parts.

How paying works, written before anybody pays (2026-09-29)

P35, G54. The terms promised "these terms will say how paying works before you are ever asked for money", and now they do. Every line is one the code keeps; the refund window is the founder's.

Tendd Pro's monthly price moves to $9.99 (2026-09-30)

D4 amended by the founder after a pricing audit: $9.99 a month, $69 a year unchanged. Every line that prints the monthly price or the yearly saving was changed with it; the rows above that record earlier changes keep the price they were written at.

Help, About and Contact exist (2026-09-30)

P36, G32 and G40. The founder: "дальше делай сам страницы Help, About и Contact". No design ever drew them, so each is built from lines the product already says and keeps: the landing's FAQ, the terms, the privacy page, the footer. The new lines are only the ones that say where something is ("On Your sources, choose Reconnect") or what is absent ("There is no phone line and no chat"). The footer's "Careers" became "Help": there are no jobs, and a page saying so would be a link for the sake of a column.

help

about

contact

Canonical subscription dataset (product fixtures, not authored copy)

The 14-subscription sample that repeats across Home, its states, and the Subscription Detail master pane is product data, not voice copy, and is not rewritten. It is listed once here and referenced elsewhere as "the canonical list". Total: $192.90 / month.

The line inventory

Every interface line, verbatim, grouped by cluster and then by screen. The columns are the ones How to read this defines.

Cluster A: Welcome landing and Path Choice

welcome (public marketing landing)

The story, added 2026-08-14 (D-Hero). The public page's second block is a stage that holds still while the reader scrolls through it: the canonical fourteen drift as a field, gather into a list, and three of them are cancelled one at a time. The same decision took the proof panel out of the hero, so the four lines that stood in it (the label, the count, the total and the caption) are now the head of the stage and are listed once, under story. The zone was called cut-list for one day. Four totals and four counts are real text in the page, one per state, because CSS cannot rewrite the words inside an element and a string rendered from a stylesheet would be a line of product copy this file cannot own. Cancelled is the one new word on the whole page, and it is spelled the way cancel-win already spells it ("You just cancelled Netflix"), not the American single-l. The three that are cancelled are the three the product itself names: Netflix, which cancel-win cancels, and Peloton App and The New York Times, the two the cancel nudge on home flags as not opened (it was home-savefocus until 2026-08-21). Their prices are the fixture prices, so $192.90 minus $47.98 is $144.92 and a reader can check it against the rows in front of them.

Light 2, added 2026-09-26 (P16). The page was rebuilt around the same argument and kept every line below; it adds no sentence. What it adds is five uses of lines it already owned, each listed in the last rows of this table: the swap button's second label, which is the bar's own "Sign in" uncovered under a pointer while the link keeps "Get started free" as its name; the three section labels, which are the bar's three links set again above the blocks they point at; four figures counted up on a panel, each standing over a sentence the page already says; the three step titles repeated large and grey as moving decoration; and the name, set huge and faint at the foot. The count and the total also appear once more, on two glass cards in the whirlpool, before the list forms.

The bar at the foot arrived on 2026-08-16, on the founder's decision, and it added one string rather than two: its second line is the D7 trust line word for word, the sentence this product repeats on purpose, and reusing it is not a second edition of it. The year in the first line is the only literal the public page carries that nothing else owns.

The third line arrived on 2026-09-26, after the fourteen tiles became the services' own published marks. The page shows other companies' names and logos in its story and nowhere says whose they are, and a reader could take a logo on a marketing page for a partnership. It says who does not stand behind the page and whose the marks are, in two plain sentences, and it claims nothing about the law. Whether that is enough is a lawyer's question, G49.

path-choice

The doors of node 1.2 are a card since 2026-09-27 (P17), opened over the landing by "Get started free" and standing on /path-choice for everybody who arrives by address. Every line is the one the screen had, less the three the rewrite log above lists.

terms

The public document, added 2026-09-20. Node 1.2 promises "Terms and Privacy Policy" and the landing's footer promises "Terms", and until this page existed both pointed at a screen that asks a stranger to sign in. P12.

privacy

The public document, added 2026-09-20. Every claim on it was read out of the code before it was written down, the way data-privacy is: the three promises are the same three strings that screen owns, and the list of who else can see your data is the list of hostnames the running product actually talks to. P12.

Cluster B: Connect Bank, Add Subscription, Guided Reveal, Sign In

connect-bank (+ loading, error, empty, cancelled)

add-subscription (+ loading, error, empty)

guided-reveal (+ empty)

sign-in (+ sent, expired)

Added 2026-08-10 with the auth model. Node 1.6 is the one screen in the onboarding family that returns a person rather than activating one, so it takes the shape and none of the persuasion.

One panel in three steps since 2026-09-27 (P17), and it stands in two places: a dialog over the public page and the page /sign-in. choose is the two ways in, email the field, sent the address stated back. With Google off the panel opens on email, and on the expired state the heading changes and the steps do not. The rewrite log above says what each line was.

Deliberately absent, and it is a line that must never be written here: "that email is not registered", or any wording that tells the reader whether an address has an account. Saying it to one person says it to anybody who asks. The screen behaves the same either way, and the mail that arrives is the one that fits.

sign-in-mail (+ first)

Added 2026-09-24 with G46. The letter node 1.6 promises, and until this day the one product surface whose words nobody here had written: Supabase's default said "Magic Link" and "Follow this link to login". Built from supabase/templates/sign-in.html, which npm run check:mail holds to these rows in both directions.

Two letters, because Supabase sends two. An address it has never seen gets sign-in-mail-first, and that is where the screen's promise above is kept: the screen says the same thing to everybody, and the letter, which only the owner of the address reads, is allowed to say which case this is. It says so because of the person the screen was built around, who typed an address from a month ago: the first letter tells them their list is under another one, instead of opening an empty Tendd.

{{ .Email }} is printed as it is written, because the template is the line.

sign-in-mail-first carries everything sign-in-mail does except its preview line and the title body line, which it replaces with its own three.

Deliberately absent: "tap". The screen above still says it, and the upgrade screen dropped it on the ground that the product is read on a desktop as often as a phone. A letter is opened on either, so it says "open".

Cluster C: Home and Subscription Detail

home (+ empty, one, few, error, loading)

subscription-detail (+ price-change, payment-failed, unrecognized, loading, error)

Cluster D: Alerts, Cancel Guide, Cancel Win, Share Snapshot

alerts (+ empty, loading, error)

cancel-guide (+ no-guide, blocked)

cancel-win

The two share lines are authored and kept, and they are out of MVP: node 4.11 Share Snapshot is LATER, so an MVP screen cannot lead there (D-Share, founder, 2026-08-04, raised by ia/docs/blocks.md). In MVP the win screen ends on the continue line. The copy stays here rather than being deleted and rewritten later; the same applies to every share-snapshot line below.

share-snapshot (+ loading, error)

Cluster E: History and Trends, Upgrade, Connections, Data and Privacy, Settings

history-trends (+ locked, empty, loading, error)

upgrade (+ processing, payment-failed, current-plan, renewal-failed)

On the cancel nudge, 2026-08-21, and it is one line where there were two. The Save tab was retired and its block moved onto Home, which merged two strings into one: the summary strip's "a month. You could save up to $29.99 a month by cutting 2 you might not be using" and the block's own "Two you have not opened in a while. No pressure, just a nudge." The strip goes back to "a month, for what you have signed up for" on every state of Home, because a savings figure in the biggest thing on the screen makes the calm view a pitch, and this product's first principle is that the calm view sells nothing. The figure is a fact about two rows, so it is stated on them: "Cutting both would save you $29.99 a month." "Cutting both" and not "by cutting 2 you might not be using", which counted the same two things twice in one sentence.

On the renewal line, 2026-08-20, and why it is not the payment-failed line with a different date. upgrade-payment-failed can afford to be short because nothing is at stake: the person is on Free, nothing was charged, and the worst case is that they stay where they are. Here the plan is already theirs and the money is already flowing, so the sentence has to carry a date, a grace period and a downgrade - and it has to put what is NOT lost before what is. The order is deliberate and it is D-Free read out loud: nothing deleted, nothing capped, the list and the total and this month against last unchanged; then, and only then, the four things that pause. "Not now" and not "Maybe later", because "later" is what you say to an offer and this is not an offer.

On the cancel line, and the three things it does not say. No discount, no "are you sure you want to lose", no "tell us why". A product whose whole promise is that cancelling should be easy cannot make its own subscription the hard one, and every retention pattern the category uses here is the pattern node 4.9 exists to help people survive. The consequence is stated above the action rather than sprung after it, and what it says first is what the person is actually afraid of: the list stays.

connections (+ empty, reconnect, add-source)

data-privacy (+ delete-confirm)

settings (+ no-account)

Two rows are missing from this state on purpose. There is no "What Tendd tells you about" block, because there is no address to send anything to, and a preference screen for messages that cannot arrive is theatre. That fact is not hidden: it is the second of the three lines above, written as what an account changes rather than as a lack. And there is no "Sign out", because there is nothing to sign out of.

Discrepancies flagged (Step 1, not yet resolved)

Nothing below is rewritten. These are the places where the product says the same thing in different words, or slips into a tone we said we would avoid. Step 3 (Dictionary and Forbidden) and Step 4 (Microcopy rules) decide each one.

Each one was settled in Voice: Dictionary and Voice: Forbidden.